A thing that I hate in you
The very thing that's got in you
Its a thing you already know
Which makes me unwell with woe
You take everything to mind
For some to be felt in your heart
I can't stop wondering why you do that
Forcing yourself to be blind
You act like a cold hearted man
A man who doesn't feel a thing
Even if you don't give a damn
You are filled with delightful things
Burning down your pleasant feelings inside
Parting from them never to seek you
Disallowing them to be on your side
Suppressing them from getting close to you
I'll be with you till the world ends
For you are as sweet as you ever been
I am the most trustworthy of your friends
For you've the purest mind I've ever seen
So tell me why you do it
Be kind enough to reward a bit
You seem to have no clue
Of how many people adore you
I am afraid one day it will take over
So never let it grow in you
Don't lie to yourself whatsoever
Not to let anything despise you
I can't see you suffer with remorse or regret
Until you're down with last drop of sweat
Open your heart to the beauty that surrounds you
Embrace those priceless feelings that cherish you
For it's the only reason we live and never forget
The very thing that's got in you
Its a thing you already know
Which makes me unwell with woe
For some to be felt in your heart
I can't stop wondering why you do that
Forcing yourself to be blind
You act like a cold hearted man
A man who doesn't feel a thing
Even if you don't give a damn
You are filled with delightful things
Burning down your pleasant feelings inside
Parting from them never to seek you
Disallowing them to be on your side
Suppressing them from getting close to you
I'll be with you till the world ends
For you are as sweet as you ever been
I am the most trustworthy of your friends
For you've the purest mind I've ever seen
So tell me why you do it
Be kind enough to reward a bit
You seem to have no clue
Of how many people adore you
I am afraid one day it will take over
So never let it grow in you
Don't lie to yourself whatsoever
Not to let anything despise you
I can't see you suffer with remorse or regret
Until you're down with last drop of sweat
Open your heart to the beauty that surrounds you
Embrace those priceless feelings that cherish you
For it's the only reason we live and never forget
Wowo...Lovely thoughts but for whom ;)
ReplyDeleteIt is important to see the good qualities in a person as well as their faults--and focus on the good. Excellent write!! Thank you so much for sharing this with The Writers' Post!! I look forward to more :)
ReplyDeleteJenn.
Curious as to who this is written for---makes me want to read more. Good job!
ReplyDeleteYes, I'm curious as to the character behind ( rather in front of?) this too.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful written. I am sure one day he will open up and see who is beside him ... perhaps the author of this poem!
ReplyDeletereally beautifull writting , u make us proud to be ur friends
ReplyDeleteThank you for all your valuable comments on this blog post! I really appreciate. Just to answer your curiosity as to the character behind the poem, out of many people I respect the most in my life, there is one special person whom I really adore. This is about that person.
ReplyDeleteGreat writing. I like the dark....
ReplyDeleteso much words to say never hide let some love you
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