Here is my new short story. Hope you guys enjoy reading it.
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March 12, 2020
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Notes
I wrote this story in two hours and made a few edits before publishing it. This work is special to me because it is nice and tight. Every feeling emerging between the lines is implicit; there is no explicit description of the emotions felt by the characters. Also there is a mild suspense about the "thing", which reveals itself in the end. Hence, it can be called as a romantic-suspense story. This is also my shortest story I have ever written. At last, it is based on a true event which happened in my life three years ago.
Good story! I enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Berthold Gambrel. I really appreciate it!
DeleteVery nice story. The suspense made it more interesting :) thank you
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